Feedback/Revisions

Some of the feedback I got was the cover photo needs to be brighter. The whole magazine could be brighter, a lot of dark colors. I need to take some of my own photos and get more action pictures. I could mix up the font a little bit. On the table of contents, I should make the text bigger.

Some revisions I am going to make in the third quarter is taking some of my own photos on the golf course. I will make the magazine more bright overall. I will alter the font and the font size to be easier to read and make it pop more.